Express!
Your word flowing across the page is what I want to see. Let me feel the emotion flow from your pen (or keybord as it is). Take me to another place. Let me see your mind as you do.
Black Fence
If I was you, and you were me,
Then and only then you would see
The darkness lurking inside me,
And you would quit dismissing it,
Once you've seen the world through my eye,
And see the things that make me cry,
You will see why i want to die,
See the light in my mind unlit,
Glasses or none, two eyes or one,
You'll see why I've not seen the sun.
Light never fought, so darkness won,
And made my sight an evil sense,
But i am me, and you are you,
Never the same, Forever Two.
Try to help if you wish to,
But I'm trapped inside a Black Fence.
-Michael
Appraisal
Once my whole life has come to pass,
Looking back will it shine like brass?
Or will i see just shattered glass?
To what do I amass?
If, reviewing life through new found eyes
It's only filled with lots of sighs,
Crying, whining,and countless lies,
Then what will i realize?
If, sationed with a different view
I see the work as seen by you,
You did more than i ever knew,
So, maybe i did too?
But at this current time and place
Life's moving at a fervored pace.
My role in life has struck my face.
I'm useless, empty space.
-Michael
To be clear I dont agree with his statements about himself.
Looking back will it shine like brass?
Or will i see just shattered glass?
To what do I amass?
If, reviewing life through new found eyes
It's only filled with lots of sighs,
Crying, whining,and countless lies,
Then what will i realize?
If, sationed with a different view
I see the work as seen by you,
You did more than i ever knew,
So, maybe i did too?
But at this current time and place
Life's moving at a fervored pace.
My role in life has struck my face.
I'm useless, empty space.
-Michael
To be clear I dont agree with his statements about himself.